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hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-02-08 07:19 PM

your sweet
caring and kind
so why do people she the past
when you walk by

your nicer than
most people
i know
but only when were alone

cant you give up
your tough image
you always say you want to change

then why not take my hand
and change what they think
or is it me not wanting to be seen?

hey

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-08 07:33 PM

Nice...very nice

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-08 11:04 PM

its deffnently not you hiddensmiles. the guy your talking about is prolly nevious what other people might think if he "lets down" his tough guy routine. great poem!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-02-09 02:56 PM

JJ amazing poem I loved the feeling in this hope to read more...
Krysti

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-02-10 01:48 PM

i don't know falling rain, maybe i am trying to open a door with a million different keys and when i find the right one all ill want is to close the door again

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

5 posted 2008-02-10 02:03 PM

I loved it.
It's a very strong poem.
great job.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-02-19 05:41 PM

your nicer than
most people
i know
but only when were alone..."

Thats True for a lot of people!

Well said..

ARCTIC WIND

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

7 posted 2008-02-29 12:23 PM

thank you

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

8 posted 2008-03-02 09:40 PM

Man I just have to say that this is totaly me and if I didn't put this in my library before it's goin there now!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

JKyleC
New Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 4

9 posted 2008-03-02 10:36 PM

I liked it... reminded me of how I am sometimes ;

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

10 posted 2008-03-29 12:06 PM

thank you

JJ

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

11 posted 2008-04-01 10:08 PM

Hey, this poem is very will written and i know how you feel with someone who is also diffrent when its just me and him.

*-crazycece-*

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

12 posted 2008-04-01 10:43 PM

I agree with arctic, remember if a door closes climb though a window. nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

13 posted 2008-05-12 12:31 PM

thank you

JJ

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