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Teen Poetry #8

Take A Bullet For Your Wordspinner

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-05-05 09:56 AM

I’m the word spinner, the Aussie wonder
And I write the poems thatwill pull you under.
My long brown hair lies upon my face
my life is shattered and fragile like lace

I’ve been screwed over and left broken hearted
Pushed and shoved because I far ted
This world’s insane an I’ll be the first to declare
I’m no angel far out I swear

I’m still here and my talent remains
I’m wild, exciting and always insane
I’m tall and good-looking and I taste great
And who gives a rat’s bum if I stand you up on a date

I’m fast and exciting, delectable and hot
You mess with me once, i’ll smack you with a pot
I’m innocent and guilty all in one
The war’s already over because i already won

The word spinner’s here and she’s taking her crown
And those who don’t like it can just drown
Her red nail polish will shine like wet paint
Because she’ll always be a sinner,she'll never be a saint

[This message has been edited by RevengeIsMine (05-06-2008 12:11 AM).]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-05-06 05:43 PM

Interesting. I really like the last bit.
Great job as always,

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-05-06 07:35 PM

this has got to be one of the best things i've ever read, i love it esp the last line

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

3 posted 2008-05-06 08:08 PM

wow this deff explains you alot! greatness always comes from the best writers...and this is greatness ...... much love

-keagan

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

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