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Her eyes |
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spiderilia Junior Member
since 2008-04-24
Posts 21Israel |
Her eyes her eyes... hide down the truth, when she is telling me her lies her eyes... are shining like a fire, well she's the prettiest of all the fireflies her eyes... they make me fly, so high right when I see her smiles her eyes... they make me feel so bad, I want to die just when i see her cries. her eyes... I look at them, and all I wanna is to tie bough of our lives. so if she'll ask: "what is so beautifull about me, that he all the time describes?" Ill answer with no doubt, those are her eyes, her eyes, her eyes...  waiting for your replies... |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I absolutly Love it. This is such a sweet poem, and it sounds just like some one I know. A lovely, fantastic write that is going in my library. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Spiderillia. Every time i read your poems, i absolutely like your poems even more! you have a special way with words. This poem is deffenently going to my library! Great Job!! ~Zach~ |
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spiderilia Junior Member
since 2008-04-24
Posts 21Israel |
thanks for the good replies... Ill keep writting as long as youll keep reading... |
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imsimplyme Junior Member
since 2008-04-01
Posts 16California |
really good poem, it made me think of someone i know. cant wait to read more from you |
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