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pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-10-20 09:28 PM

I read a book
About a gang
And from reality,
Into the pages I sprang

I wish I could be
A part of their lives
Even though hes a hood,
He seemed so kind,

Im an Outsider too
Dont they see?
You know, he really is
A lot like me

I love the sunsets
Fightings not my thing
And all the time,
As a tag-a-long Im seen

I doubt I would fit in
But I really think Id try
You can see the sunset
Real good Ive heard
From the East Side

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (10-21-2006 04:24 PM).]

patience_iago
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 54

1 posted 2006-10-20 09:32 PM

Holy Goodness, i love this, im on the fence if you tried to make allusions to the Outsiders, and if you did Bravo.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

patience_iago
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 54

2 posted 2006-10-20 09:37 PM

Okay, i reread it, and of course you are talking about the Outsiders. I love that Novel, honestly, ive read so much in my life, but that book, from the 6th grade, will always be in my top 3. I really love this, and im going to go check out your other stuff right now.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2006-10-21 04:03 PM

Confused! Can you get rid of the weird symbols! I will reread then, it would be easier. That book is soo good! read recently best book I have ever read.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

4 posted 2006-10-21 04:22 PM

I swear i never put the symbols in they've just been showing up lately. they're bloody annoying too!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-10-21 11:53 PM

i also loved that book it was a nice adittion to that book lovley.
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

6 posted 2006-10-22 07:25 AM

It did not seemed forced at all and it reallly did sum up the OUtsiders too.. Nice job.

As for the symbols go to TEch talk , ask ron or a mod how to fix the symbol things cause he put something in the CA forum about how to fix it , just dont remember how. Ask Ron cause they are annoying, and its not ur fault I think it is just the computer.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

7 posted 2006-10-26 05:21 PM

fixed the symbols just cant put in apostrophes or commas anymore.

PoetrySinger
Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

8 posted 2006-10-27 01:44 PM

I feel the same way sometimes now how about when you listen to musci and hear the words. write a poem and tell me how you feel abotu that and check out my poems to

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