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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-23 08:19 PM



I wonder if I ever cross your mind, just
for one second or two.
Than I catch your beutiful brown eyes
peircing into me.
Trying not to smile trying not to laugh.
I try to keep working on my math.
But i cant help to think, maybe you do
still care, Maybe you do still love me
Maybe your not that heartless monster
I predected you to be, just a messed up
tennage boy.

And when you walk past me I know you wana
say something, maybe sorry or at lease hi.
You open your mouth to say it, than in a
flash you close it. Because you think that
maybe i did mean what i said when i said
i hate you.
But babe I really dont, I know you were just
being anormal boy, and i was being a normal
girl.

You do cross my mind also every moment every
day. Every time some one says I love you.
I think you.

*-crazycece-*

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-04-26 05:44 PM


awe, I love the last line..or 2 lines. Very nice poem.


     {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

masksrlife
Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
2 posted 2008-04-27 04:02 PM


Thank you very much appreciated.

*-crazycece-*

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