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I Still Remember
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I Still Remember |
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powerxxx Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 17 |
Love That mystery Love That unknown discovery Remember when we held our hands? And said : what is this beautiful feeling? Remember when we promised to discover love? The memories that we build along our adventures together They will remain here with me forever My Love I miss you And I wrote a poem just for You "Come along Let us raise our flag of faith The faith our undying love The overflowing passion and the consuming love that runs through our hearts Together we set our hearts sails To run through this world endlessly I remember when I first fell in love with you I remember the miracle i saw The only one I believed in I remember seeing you The memories Of your warmness Your kind arms around me your overflowing love sorrounding me And your moon light smile You always said it was me No, It's in fact we In history you and i were meant to be My Love If I would ever come to an eternal sleep The only thing I would dream about is you And that good-bye Would break my heart and leave it to die If I lose you i would endlessly cry I wish for us to be together forever Away from this ugly life Together let us fly Up in the sky, so high... Together to laugh and cry And together never to say good-bye" I still remember that you loved me even in death But After you left My Heart Left This World With You... My Love I Still Remember You I Still Remember Loving You |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
It was just a tad bit repetitive. But it was beautifully written. Keep it up! AIM-beatufu1tragidy |
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