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Teen Poetry #8
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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
0 posted 2008-04-21 06:22 PM


You walk int omy life so
unexpected you take me
in your arms hold me
tight than push me on
the ground kick me than
mock me over and over again.
I felt like i'v been shot
suffering but not dying.
You were the other piece
in my life that made me whole.
And now your gone you got me
up every early morning and now
theres no need to get up at all.
I'm so empty, i'm so abbandon
with out love, letting out my
anger in forms of blood.
And you did this to me you
are a beast, a monster who
feasted on my heart who stole
my soal. Who stole my trust and love.

*-crazycece-*
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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-04-21 10:31 PM

nice write!!
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.
rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
2 posted 2008-04-21 10:46 PM

nice

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget
masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
3 posted 2008-04-23 02:36 PM

Thank you guys, I appreciate that.

*-crazycece-*
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