The Pale Lit Moon (A Mate Of RevengeIsMine's)

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BootScootingCowgirl
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since 2008-04-06

Posts 1

0 posted 2008-04-06 09:59 AM

Hi guys,
I'm a mate of RevengeIsMine and i decided to give this whole poetry place a go.. anyway please tell me what you think honesty never hurt nobody..

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Under The Pale Lit Moon

When you love someone so deep inside
I guess seems like that love is so easy to hide
You’ve loved him for so very long
That in your eyes he could do no wrong

Every day you would hope and pray
That you and him would always stay this way
He treated you like you should be treated
He made you feel your life was completed

You thought your love was pure and true
But the one day it all turned blue
He started putting you down and it hurt
He thought to him you were nothing but dirt

He started ignoring you and you wondered why
All you wanted to do was lay down and die
You thought your relationship would never end
But it was fake and you couldn’t pretend

Then one night he was so sweet to you
And you thought all those things were maybe untrue
Two nights later and he was back
He tried and he tried to get you in the sack

He said he didn’t want to get serious
And that you yourself had become to curious
But deep down you knew it wouldn’t last
And all those nice things he said were in the past

You thought that you may marry him someday
But deep down you knew to stay away
You wanted things back the way they were before
But you knew this couldn’t happen anymore

It was a Wednesday night at about 8 o’clock
You heard the news and it wasn’t a shock
You knew this was going to happen soon
As you laid there and cried under the pale lit moon

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2008-04-06 08:31 PM

cowgirl welcome to pip. I like this poem theres just something about it.....

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-04-08 09:52 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-11 12:48 PM

Welcome To Passions I loved this!!!! great 1st post

Krysti

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-04-11 06:22 PM

good first post i like it alot and welcome(ps i liked the style so much its going in im lib. for later)

JJ

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

5 posted 2008-04-22 09:41 PM

i loved it!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

6 posted 2008-04-23 12:51 PM

This poem was so beautiful and it leaves you questioning what news she got,s o thought provoking... nice job

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

7 posted 2008-04-23 03:00 PM

welcome.

great write, great first impression.
relates to where i am right now haha.

i loved it.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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