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Teen Poetry #8
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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321
0 posted 2008-04-20 11:38 PM

yea dis is like a song and like im not done so yea well hmmm....here


My life was so synthetic
Most of the time I felt so pathetic
And then you lifted me off my feet
Now I don’t feel so dang cheep

My life is dead to me
Now that I see

Youre face
Youre grace
Youre mercy

You were there when I fell
You were there I could tell
I was missing you
Missing you

Now Im kissing your cheek
I want to be more meek
Cuz you were
Cuz you are
There for me
And I love you
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rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2008-04-21 12:03 PM

sounds pretty great job

ps cheap is spelled with an a.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget
justanotherstorm
Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321
2 posted 2008-04-21 12:20 PM

thnx V lol
well i guess now a days we have to help each other spell huh (squeaking) lol
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