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schizandrax
New Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 4

0 posted 2008-04-14 03:31 AM

Wait!
They say time flies
But i will chased and make it stop
And if time refused
I will bargain to the last second of seconds
Just to make you stay awhile

Everything freezes
Except moments of conversation
Every hour counts
Every minute is precious
And every second makes a difference

Another two seconds
And time is set to go
Listen to the ticking
We still have time

“I love you
Please stay”
And the machine
Could not wait...

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

1 posted 2008-04-14 05:42 PM

nice!!!

i love this:
Everything freezes
Except moments of conversation
Every hour counts
Every minute is precious
And every second makes a difference

congrats on your first post and welcome to PIP!!!! ah, seems like only yesterday when i joined...

xoxo,
Jaki H

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-14 05:50 PM

good write!!

JJ

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-14 07:40 PM

Welcome to pip

lol very will written! Good job.

*-crazycece-*

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2008-04-14 07:42 PM

oh wow thats some good stuff
cool poem

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-04-14 07:44 PM

Wow!! Very good!!! I love that topic you wrote about. I can really connect.

Great work!!

~Zach~

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-04-14 09:18 PM

oh i forgot lol welcome to passions!!

JJ

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

7 posted 2008-04-14 10:14 PM

WOW Exelent
and WELCOME TO PIP!!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

schizandrax
New Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 4

8 posted 2008-04-14 10:21 PM

Thanks everyone for making me feel at home!! Appreciate the comments and i hope i can write more good ones...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

9 posted 2008-04-18 11:16 AM

Great poem Mica!! and Welcome to Passions

.. although unlike Jaki It doesnt seem like yesterday.. mostly cos it was like a million years ago:P its been great heer the whole time though
Krysti

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