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jbal892 Member
since 2007-11-25
Posts 58 |
Mistakes A grave mistake, I’ve made I want to go back in time and change it all I broke her trust and hurt her bad I broke my vow to never do that I vowed to myself I wouldn’t hurt her, I would never lose her trust. Where am I now? Fighting, fighting for all I’m worth Trying to keep that strand of trust alive. Praying, praying with all my might That she’ll fully forgive me Let me have her trust back I probably never deserve her trust again, I probably never deserve her again The pain inside, it runs so deep I need a way to take this back Change what I did and make things right She deserves better than this, better than me How can I expect her to forgive me completely? I broke her trust, everything she put into me I broke my vow to myself Never hurting her in anyway Look what I’ve done, Look at the mess I’ve made. So much to clean up So much to regain I acted like a big brother Not like the boyfriend she needed Too overprotective, overbearing I’m a fool; I didn’t realize it in time Hoping, pleading, begging for forgiveness For her trust For my sanity Fighting for her trust, doing anything to regain it I'm still writing it right now..just thought I would post what I have... It's been a while since I've posted anything on piptalk, everything's been going great..until this |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I hope that everything will go back to being good. This is a lovely poem, i can't wait to see more of it. {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write, i feel your words as i read, i too hope things work out for the best JJ |
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