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But Afloat |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
But Afloat I don’t know how to say The words upon my mind There is hardly any form So deceiving, so declined I’m not hurt, no not bitter I just can’t seem to think For the thoughts come to me Should turn my face pink Two souls in one body One half of one whole I’m tried of trying To press diamonds of coal But one thing could I show you To turn but your ear I miss every love That to me, true, was dear So I cried when you told me So I laughed when you said That the person of loathing Was one I would dread So groping in winter With not but a coat I’m passing all feeling To stay but afloat and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
good poem! JJ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
thankyou i haven't written in a while- writer's block you know. and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
yeah i know, i've been waiting for some more poems! JJ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Library, definatly library. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
i love it I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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