Teen Poetry #8 |
The Prize (Sequel to "The Best Man") |
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
The story has moved apace and this poem needed to be written. The Prize It need not be you, came a voice to my mind I shuddered, thinking to leave the prize behind But slowly my now ready gun Traced the ground for I was done The prize had lost none of its luster But ambition I could no longer muster I still see the light of that powerful mark Shining through mists of clouding dark It’s not in angers easy shot Or just toward the passion hot So I step forward, help his second chance And thus begin this subtle dance The best man here will win the prize The glory will shine there in his eyes But I know not whether this angry fool Will ever we marksmen rule Where is the Champion? Loving and bold? Worthy of the prize I’ll never hold? And what can I do? This marksmen turned priest Should I point out the poison that lurks in their feast? The glory it shines out from such a dark prize Only for a moment does it come to his eyes For fickle are the whims of fate Can’t win in a moment and then it’s too late This is not how the story ends I know that we are still good friends I’m still a marksmen but I can now see That the prize need not go to him or to me Let come the Marksman, with true seeing sight Let compassion be his might Quick let him claim the glorious prize And never force me to avert my eyes "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) [This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (04-07-2008 08:32 PM).] |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
Nicely written JJ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
So I step forward, help his second chance And thus begin this subtle dance the beauty of lines of prose becomes thee well. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Lol Thanks guys! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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