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Teen Poetry #8

Without You

ily06.12.07
Junior Member

since 2007-11-24

Posts 15

0 posted 2008-04-02 09:46 PM

Every time i find happiness,
This just brings me down.
I see things I put behind me and forgot,
I hear voices,
I get cold shakes,
and theres always tears in my eyes,
I feel depressed.
I was so close of getting out of this hole she dug for me,
but i fell back in.
Right now i need a little more attention,
A little more love,
A hand to hold,
A shoulder to cry on,
An understanding voice,
I need you now more than ever.
With you I don't have to fight,
The voices become quiet,
The flashbacks don't come,
I feel normal with you,
I don't want to loose you over this,
I don't think I'll be able to breathe without you.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-02 10:32 PM

beautiful and sweet!!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-04-03 06:22 PM

awe this is really good for one of your first posts! i really like this. keep up the great writing!!

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-03 06:52 PM

very sweet.

*-crazycece-*

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

4 posted 2008-04-07 08:50 PM

just a word of caution make sure you want that person for them and not the idea of them. sometimes you dont always want what you think you do.

-jenna

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