Teen Poetry #8 |
Don't hide.. I'm here for you |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
This was made to be a happy poem. So just beacause it says "noose" doesn't mean that its all about sucide and death. Hope you guys like!! ~Zach~ -------------------------------------------- You hide your pain behind a smile You can't go on like this just stay for a while. One day its all over flow and break loose Before it end up at the noose. Your mask will break and shatter because of your pain Holding this all in. is all in vain. Express in a lighter way. talk to others and from the passing of the days You'll get better. no matter how long it takes. You can do it. you alone will not forsake. I'm here with you. by your side Theres nothing to fear, nothing to hide. i am your friend. i'll fight till the end Because this fight. I will fight for you my friend. Don't fear its all over now We here at the end of the road....safe and sound. |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
I really like this poem. It kinda sounds like stuff i have wrote. And it kind of sounds like so one im realy close to. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I love it. it's very sweet.. {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
this is nice,good write JJ |
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