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0 posted 2008-03-30 06:20 PM


This was made to be a happy poem. So just beacause it says "noose" doesn't mean that its all about sucide and death. Hope you guys like!!

~Zach~
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You hide your pain behind a smile
You can't go on like this just stay for a while.

One day its all over flow and break loose
Before it end up at the noose.

Your mask will break and shatter because of your pain
Holding this all in. is all in vain.

Express in a lighter way.
talk to others and from the passing of the days

You'll get better. no matter how long it takes.
You can do it. you alone will not forsake.

I'm here with you. by your side
Theres nothing to fear, nothing to hide.

i am your friend. i'll fight till the end
Because this fight. I will fight for you my friend.

Don't fear its all over now
We here at the end of the road....safe and sound.

© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
1 posted 2008-03-30 08:23 PM


I really like this poem. It kinda sounds like stuff i have wrote. And it kind of sounds like so one im realy close to.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
2 posted 2008-04-07 10:22 PM


I love it. it's very sweet..

   {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-07 11:36 PM


this is nice,good write

JJ

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