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Teen Poetry #8

Hidden Death

CrimsonTears
New Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 5
Over The Rainbow

0 posted 2008-04-01 10:12 AM

Hidden deeply under my scars

Time has unravled itself to be
Fully aware of what has stolen me

Broken is how I will stay

Searching for a reason so I can see
What has bound me behind this reality

Left alone to wander the night

Frozen tears of regret move gracefully down my face
As I'm forgotten alone in this dark place

Dead is how I will be left in the end

runningwithdoubt---x

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-04-04 03:14 AM

Welcome to Passions I like this poem.. it was full of feeling and the mood of the poem was very detectable. Great fisrt post
Krysti

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-04 01:31 PM

welcome welcome welcome! lol sorry im hyper but ya great poem. waiting to read more

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