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Teen Poetry #8

Try Not To Push

jwack741
New Member

since 2008-03-31

Posts 7

0 posted 2008-03-31 10:25 PM

some would say its complicating,
i guess i would agree,
the words only go so far,
they can mean so much,
the meaning belittled by the action,
actions can feel so good yet hurt so bad,
unlike words you can't take them back,
they stay.
i want to stay more than anything,
but those are just words,
you want me to stay,
but there is no action.
time shortens as the distance lengthens,
time is the action i wish i could change,
if it's my time you want,
than give me an action,
cause my action is giving time,
and i only have so much.
wounds will slowly heal,
they can't heal faster,
i'm close to the edge,
and your pushing me off,
im fighting the push,
others calling me down.
they say it's not worth it you'll fall eventually,
i say if i fall it's cause i was pushed.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-08 07:15 PM

nice write my fav part is
"im close to the edge
and your pushings me off"

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