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masksrlife
Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-03-27 06:54 PM



my body grows limp
with that one more touch
of pain
my eyes filling up
with the sorow so plain
life just ended
my heart just dropped

i grasp your hand just once more
my tears seem endless
my heart is sore
i whip my head around
just after are on last hug
and say just leave
just leave
and stay away
while i wisper i love you
never go!<3

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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-04-08 07:17 PM


good write!!!!! i have a poem that starts kinda the same way"stormy night"

JJ

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-09-2008 11:30 PM).]

ShawtySheFly
Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)
2 posted 2008-04-09 11:13 AM


good write

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