Teen Poetry #8 |
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the crime. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
written in the guys POV. just a little idea i had in my head and decided to write on it. my love did not die but instead it was murdered and the killer looks into my eyes wanting me to take back her i may be a blonde but i know when theres danger im not stupid enough to know that killers consume anger i was hurt when she committed that crime i thought i had her heart but she just had mine and it was wounded by the rebound of the gunshot my love was killed and it cost me a lot i may still love her but how can i go on wounded like this? how do i know that next time the shot just wont miss? the killer wont put down the gun not even for me so what am i supossed to do when the dnager just wont leave? even if the murderer does back off i would still make her pay the cost i would grab a gun and put it to my heart let her feel what it feels like to be lost the music in my heart has died this dying heart will stop so i just carve it out and lock it away in a music box it stays there forever cuz im hoping it will be revived and maybe, just maybe the music, the magic will come back to life no one can get to it the walls around my heart stand firm maybe watching the consequences of criminals actions will give us lessons to learn this is why you dont play around with guns cause someone will get hurt and life wont be so fun as the killer comes back to stand me face to face theres only one thought that runs through my head just something that i need to say "ill make it easy for you this time here, take my heart take it, kill it, i dont care because i dont want it anymore" only a vampire can love you forever. |
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xbrokenxlullabyx Junior Member
since 2007-12-25
Posts 36NJ, U.S.A. |
here, take my heart take it, kill it, i dont care because i dont want it anymore" i like those lines especially. =] Susanna V. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanx susanna ![]() only a vampire can love you forever. |
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