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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2008-03-29 05:17 PM

written in the guys POV. just a little idea i had in my head and decided to write on it.

my love did not die
but instead it was murdered
and the killer looks into my eyes
wanting me to take back her
i may be a blonde
but i know when theres danger
im not stupid enough
to know that killers consume anger
i was hurt
when she committed that crime
i thought i had her heart
but she just had mine
and it was wounded
by the rebound of the gunshot
my love was killed
and it cost me a lot
i may still love her
but how can i go on wounded like this?
how do i know that next time
the shot just wont miss?
the killer wont put down the gun
not even for me
so what am i supossed to do
when the dnager just wont leave?
even if the murderer does back off
i would still make her pay the cost
i would grab a gun and put it to my heart
let her feel what it feels like to be lost
the music in my heart has died
this dying heart will stop
so i just carve it out
and lock it away in a music box
it stays there forever
cuz im hoping it will be revived
and maybe, just maybe
the music, the magic will come back to life
no one can get to it
the walls around my heart stand firm
maybe watching the consequences of criminals actions
will give us lessons to learn
this is why
you dont play around with guns
cause someone will get hurt
and life wont be so fun
as the killer comes back
to stand me face to face
theres only one thought that runs through my head
just something that i need to say
"ill make it easy for you this time
here, take my heart
take it, kill it, i dont care
because i dont want it anymore"

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

xbrokenxlullabyx
Junior Member

since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

1 posted 2008-03-29 08:28 PM

here, take my heart
take it, kill it, i dont care
because i dont want it anymore"

i like those lines especially. =]

Susanna V.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-03-29 08:29 PM

thanx susanna

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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