I said "no more love poems"...

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I said "no more love poems"...

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-03-28 12:36 PM

I told myself: no more love poems! That didn't last long. Here goes!

Love hurts,
like the first bite of winter
on a cold frosty day.
But it's nice,
'cause you know winter break
is just around the corner.

Love stings,
like the first burn of summer.
It's like the first fight between a couple.
But when they've kissed and made up,
they'll look back at that fight
and laugh.

But unlike summer vacation,
which ends in the fall,
true love lasts longer than any season.

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-03-28 01:40 AM

i really like this great job

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-29 04:16 AM

awee Andrew such a lovely poem
Krysti

xbrokenxlullabyx
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since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

3 posted 2008-03-29 08:40 PM

I really like the idea of this poem. and the meaning behind it.

nice work

Susanna V.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2008-03-30 03:11 AM

Thanks for the comments. Honestly though, I'm not so sure if this counts as a poem. I was just sitting and thinking and this came to me.

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