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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-03-26 09:01 PM



theres something wrong in the air tonight,
and i can smell the smoke.
ill never forget, a single word you said;
and it hurts you never wrote.

how could you leave without a goodbye?
was it just too hard, does it make you cry?
youll never spend another night,
inside these city lights.

you never write, you never call.
and my pencils getting duller than dull,
its like we never talked at all.
and your not here anymore,
to ever break my fall.

i wish so bad with all my heart
that you could come back,
and we could restart.
this ending just cant be real,
because your all i have.

© Copyright 2008 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-03-26 09:17 PM


great write i feel your poem
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-03-26 11:10 PM


I'll second that!
Headed to my library!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
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3 posted 2008-03-27 04:04 AM


wow.. perfectly stunning Bryan.. love it!
Krysti

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