Teen Poetry #8 |
Inside These City Lights |
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
theres something wrong in the air tonight, and i can smell the smoke. ill never forget, a single word you said; and it hurts you never wrote. how could you leave without a goodbye? was it just too hard, does it make you cry? youll never spend another night, inside these city lights. you never write, you never call. and my pencils getting duller than dull, its like we never talked at all. and your not here anymore, to ever break my fall. i wish so bad with all my heart that you could come back, and we could restart. this ending just cant be real, because your all i have. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write i feel your poem |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I'll second that! Headed to my library! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow.. perfectly stunning Bryan.. love it! Krysti |
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