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softballstar Junior Member
since 2008-03-11
Posts 15USA |
Hey I'm back but just for today I don't know when I'm coming back on. Might be awhile. Let me know what you think of my poems. Thnx Everybody's a fake They're all full of lies They wear a mask As their disguise I myself Am one of those fakes My mask covering My mistakes She shows no pain Tears or fears She only tell people What they want to hear Bleeding and crying on the inside Smiling on the out Nobody knows What we're about Until one day We let down our guard We break down like glass Breaking into a thousand shards Now everybody knows What we do Crying out feelings And cutting too We wonder why we're not good enough we wonder why we're in so much pain we feel sad and alone and nobody knows And that's what its to stay forever and ever day after day. March 2008 |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow.. Katie.. yooh are an amazing writer I love your poems!!!!! Krysti |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I will not yell and scream about the subject matter of this piece... Very well written! I will not yell and scream about the subject matter of this piece... This brought up some powerful emotions for me. I will not yell and scream about the subject matter of this piece... You see I HATE THIS STUPID GAME WE PLAY I will not yell and scream More about the subject matter of this piece... "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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