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wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
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the last place on earth

0 posted 2008-03-26 03:51 PM


now I look back
where has time gone
gone with the wind
a blinking of the eye
at the end of the year our paths we said
would always cross
but where are you now
all that we went though together
heart breaks and love
classes and fights
as I try to remember the good times
a sorrow builds up inside
for now they are not here
a memory i can not get back
your future beckons who knows where the road will take you
thats what our principal said
and never did we argue this point
but one thing we all agreed on
we'll always be mates
no matter how hard i try
I'm only left with feelings
because when the summer ended
you all went your separate ways
uni, and travel
kids and marriage
all took there preference
happiness and despair rolled into one
happy thoughts of the good times
despair that I have them no more
after all that has happened
all thats left
all thats gone
I'm the one
left behind

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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1 posted 2008-03-26 04:09 PM


wow this is a wonderful poem

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

2 posted 2008-03-26 05:57 PM


I am glad you decided, once again AWSOME!you deserve an applause "clap,clap,clap"..lol
wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
3 posted 2008-03-26 06:46 PM


thanks justanotherstorm glad you liked it

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
4 posted 2008-03-26 06:47 PM


fm2u lol thanks for the claps

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

5 posted 2008-03-26 07:03 PM


your welcome
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