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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321


0 posted 2008-03-26 01:57 PM


I just wanted to say
I still love you...

I'll never forget
how we first met
you got me in trouble
but we had a lot of laughs
sometimes I would
get kicked outta class(not really)
the next year we were closer friends
not knowing what was intended in the end
soon we shared secrets
and became best friends
remember everyone knew it first
and we knew it too
I guess
we wanted to hide the truth
my life was soon dieing
I was confused
im still cryig
we became lovers
I never wanted us to end
but God got between us
I felt Him around
and I got scared
so I had to let you go
I was never mad at you
I was just confused
I mean...
I was going to a new school
you were staying there
how could we keep our love afair
I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to break your heart
I intended us to be togeter
not to fall apart
yet I got angry at God
and you stood by Him
which is what I wanted
though I still cry
cuz at night
the memories come back
to life
and I constantly get taunted
I left God
I did walk away
cuz I was mad at Him
we went our seperate ways
I died and you kept living
I'm in the grace
of a dark soul
but this is really me
and

I just wanted to say
I still love you  

[This message has been edited by justanotherstorm (03-26-2008 06:28 PM).]

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rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2008-03-27 12:42 PM


this was really good...u should give it to the person ur talking about.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

2 posted 2008-03-27 12:37 PM


yeah sure i'll think about it
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