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krad008
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0 posted 2008-03-26 02:35 AM


I waited for you outside after class
You saw me and smiled
I took your hand and we walked off towards are lockers

I walk you to your next class and tell you we have to talk after school.........


We walk to the park and Sit down on a bench
I tell you you mean the world to me
I tell you I need you with me
I tell you everything on this planet makes since when I'm with you
I tell you your the reason I go to school
I tell you your the only one who can make me smile

We end up on the grass together
We look into each others eyes and we kiss each other
Just a soft gentle kiss

I play with your long brown hair and you laugh
You start to cry
I ask you whats wrong and hold you close to me
You tell me your scared of whats going to happen between us

I ask you if you remember your dream.
The one you had full of MAGIC where a spring rain fell
And I read your mind

You look at me with your beautiful blue eyes
and say you remember that dream.
Well what did we have in that dream.
We had MAGIC
Lots of it.....She starts to cry with with a smile

I tell her the only thing I regret is not going out with you sooner
We have one more year together before we depart are separate ways

I tell her will make this work.
Tickling her stomach she laughs
But deep down on the inside I no were gonna have a lot of trouble and things probably wont work out
Unless we have a lot of MAGIC
I no deep down I want to be with her
I look at her just lying on my chest relaxed
She doesn't no how beautiful she really is or that were probably gonna disappear from each others lives once we graduate
So we just sit there for a few hours lying on the soft spring grass

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1 posted 2008-03-26 02:45 AM


things will work out if you want them to. Best of luck. you seem like a great couple
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2 posted 2008-03-26 10:53 AM


the sweetness of this is touching.
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3 posted 2008-03-26 11:23 AM


wow this is so heartwarming =) i really hope you guys work out i mean you guys have soemthing for eachother and its jus idk but good write

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