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Assassin_of_Verse
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0 posted 2008-03-22 10:24 PM



Yo...I'm back.


Ringing Dusk

Dusk has fallen.
The sun is set.
I have fallen.
My fate is set.

Although I hurt,
I refuse to cry.
Although it hurts,
I continue to lie.

This coming June,
school will end.
This coming June,
I don't have to pretend.

Troy didn't break me.
It didn't even try.
I just wasn't ready.
(Another white lie).

© Copyright 2008 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-03-23 02:52 AM


OMG Andrew i missed yooh sooo much its not the same without yooh.. and you will notice.... everyone is gone:P:P butt good to have yooh back love your poems!! and this one too!!!
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
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2 posted 2008-03-23 12:21 PM


It's good to be back Krysti. It hasn't been the same without all the support that I have here at Passions. But what do you mean "everyone is gone"?

Anyways, I'll try to post more often (not just here).

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2008-03-23 06:30 PM


ahh well.. it seems like all the old members are gone... or are rarely here. We also have many new members.. which is a good thing! where else will you post??
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
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4 posted 2008-03-24 12:09 PM


Well, I've posted a few times in Dark Poetry (and commented). And I've posted like once in Corner Pub. I'm also thinking of posting a challenge. And of course, I'll continue to post here in Teen Poetry.
fromme2U
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5 posted 2008-03-24 05:22 PM


Nice write.
hunnie_girl
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6 posted 2008-03-25 03:23 AM


yooh better!!! cos i can clearly sai I dont get around much haha:P:P
Krysti

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7 posted 2008-03-26 06:47 AM


all the originals are gone... you know...Tempest, Stargal, Rhia, Shadow In Blue...all of them exept for a few.
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