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Teen Poetry #8
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softballstar
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since 2008-03-11
Posts 15
USA

0 posted 2008-03-24 09:18 PM


Hey sorry it's been a while a lot of stuff going on at home and yea im back for a little. tell me what you think please.

This mask I wear
She serves me well
She hides the pain
So they can't tell

They see her smile
Never my tears
She knows no sorrow
And fights all my fears

They say she is me
If only they knew
That she is my mask
My savior too

My scars she hides
Behind laughter and lies
And she says she's fine
But that's a lie

March 2008

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hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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1 posted 2008-03-25 03:28 AM


oh Katie hunn.. is everything ok email me n e time k. great poem btw I really missed your beautiful wrting you have talents gurl!!! hope everything is well and  hope to see more soon!
I know how yooh feel hunn. I spent a whole year like that... its hard and always heer if yooh need to talk.
Best Wishes
Krysti

masksrlife
Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
2 posted 2008-03-27 08:54 PM


I diffenetly love this poem! Its written so well! I to write about masks and them hidding the real me pain, and sorrow. But i just love how this one was written.

       *discrase*

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