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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321


0 posted 2008-03-20 08:02 PM


umm yea this is a song i just wrote so yea

i ask again
can u see me
cuz im looking at you

falling for you
once again
i dont know why but ive
given up on given up on you

i start crying cuz i know the truth
you love someone else
but ill never stop loving you
and im sorry
cuz i dont know what else to do

so confused and so delusional
another dream another scene with you
i start to scream
i start to scream
i start to scream for you.....
....

well yeah thats all i got right now

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-03-21 12:23 PM


it's good. I think it may be stored in my library...

    {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
2 posted 2008-03-21 01:13 AM


wow, this...this was a best. i loved it sooooo much. ur already in my library! but this was awsome.
given up on giving up on u....
i loved it!

so confused and so delusional
another dream another scene with you
i start to scream
i start to scream
i start to scream for you.....
....

that was my favorite too.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

3 posted 2008-03-22 01:45 PM


thnx
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