a dieing love a dieing heart and a little girl

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Teen Poetry #8

a dieing love a dieing heart and a little girl

justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-03-20 06:54 PM

this is the story of my life
i was adopted when i was a kid
i thought no one would care but they did
im hated but also loved
im still portrayed as a little girl
but im not perfect like the God above
im just a servant
i still feel pain from the past
but i dont know how much longer i can last
i can feel my soul dieing
every time i start crying
i tell myself i have no one
yet im surrounded by everyone
im not innocent
cuz my innocence was taken
i start breaking
and theres so many mixed emotions
im consumed by confusion anger and fear
great im crying again
here comes the tears
in my life theres a dieing love a dieing heart and a little girl
who will save her
or will she be lost in the world

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-03-21 12:39 PM

this is breath-taking, I absolutely love it. I feel the same way. Fantastic write,

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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-03-21 01:10 AM

wow this is really beautiful hannah. great job

and u have me!!! not no one

jesus loves little girls. and best thing is, he saves the lost

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

3 posted 2008-03-22 01:45 PM

thnx

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