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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
so heart broken this pain is tormenting me and i dont know what to do should i tell him or let it go so heart broken but i want him to know lost within this fear loosing whats not there again i shed a tear im so heart broken crawling inside myself trying to call for help but theres no one so heart broken again i try to push aside these walls of darkness and pain will it ever go away i dont know i still.... |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
hey w...is everything ok? n e who, this ...this was a wonderful poem. great  and obviously emotion filled. so good job, keep up the work, write from ur <3. its usually always good to say something w/e it is. and one thing tho...kinda left us haqnging. u still ...what? but really great only a vampire can love you forever. forbidden to remember, terrified to forget |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
this is deep mind me asking what happeneding with you 2? |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
all i can tell you is that its about (some of it)what i want what my God wants and what other people want for me im heart broken for somethig thats not there and i ask myself was it ever there my emotions r just out of control so dont worry about me for the people who worry ill be fine |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
dont wry, ull find out and find ur way.beautifl poem tho. only a vampire can love you forever. |
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