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Teen Poetry #8
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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
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washington, US
0 posted 2008-03-19 10:17 PM


tears fall
broken on the floor

tears have such beauty
as they dance across your face
the pain of crying, knowing the pain
the joy of letting go, to become sane
life is a journey only tears can write
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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
1 posted 2008-03-20 02:52 PM

Beautiful poem you've got here.  Very well written and it has a true message.  Life is definatly a journey only tears can write.  Great job.  Hope to hear more.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real
ShawtySheFly
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since 2007-12-19
Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)
2 posted 2008-03-25 11:38 AM

There is no way that someone couldn't lik this poem it is true and by far really good

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