Teen Poetry #8 |
On a moonless night came the light. |
XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Saphire stones shining in the light, taken deep into what soon will be reached. Don't give up hope, don't let it tare you down. Saphire stones of light, lead us from this place of what we call safety. ~sorry about the title, it just came to me..i know it doesn't make sense~~~ {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] {`~Emily~`} [This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (03-20-2008 01:19 PM).] |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this really good! and saphire is a beautiful rock and my favorite color!! yay! lol but this is really good. and yes this does make sence. ~Zach~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
nope...it don't make any sense at all! someone please tell me how this makes sense! {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
hey hey, maybe the saphire stones are like death. shimmering under the water, we are drawn to them and dive down to reach them, even if that means giving up life. maybe fer a title, u could use "diamond tears" or "preciouse(how do you spell that)treasure". great poem !Tracey! if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
It may not make sense to you unless you want it to, This is the sense I got out of it: saphires are precious stones maybe just like something or someone we consider precious and when everything seems to be going visibly wrong, what's or who is in your heart keeps you having hope to keep on especially in the scariest or confusing moments.(just like the light of a precious stone)...anyways I enjoyed your write. |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Sapphire is my birthstone! So is Beth's! TJ No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real |
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