On a moonless night came the light.

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Teen Poetry #8

On a moonless night came the light.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

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Neverland

0 posted 2008-03-19 10:13 PM

Saphire stones shining
in the light,
taken deep into
what soon will be reached.
Don't give up hope,
don't let it tare you down.
Saphire stones of light,
lead us from this place
of what we call safety.

~sorry about the title, it just came to me..i know it doesn't make sense~~~

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (03-20-2008 01:19 PM).]

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-19 10:18 PM

this really good! and saphire is a beautiful rock and my favorite color!! yay! lol but this is really good. and yes this does make sence.

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

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Neverland

2 posted 2008-03-19 10:38 PM

nope...it don't make any sense at all! someone please tell me how this makes sense!

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10

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dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-03-20 11:42 AM

hey hey,
maybe the saphire stones are like death. shimmering under the water, we are drawn to them and dive down to reach them, even if that means giving up life. maybe fer a title, u could use "diamond tears" or "preciouse(how do you spell that)treasure". great poem
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

4 posted 2008-03-20 02:10 PM

It may not make sense to you unless you want it to, This is the sense I got out of it: saphires are precious stones maybe just like something or someone we consider precious and when everything seems to be going visibly wrong, what's or who is in your heart keeps you having hope to keep on especially in the scariest or confusing moments.(just like the light of a precious stone)...anyways I enjoyed your write.

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-03-20 02:45 PM

Sapphire is my birthstone! So is Beth's!

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

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