Teen Poetry #8 |
A horrible story |
fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
It all started in the days of old Stories of folklore were often told Of creatures that roamed the night Screams can be heard out of fright But this tale is the scariest of them all It is about a girl in the days of fall She meets this one handsome guy And his charms she couldn’t deny He gives her power of no use And uses the words “I love you” to abuse He chants spells in her ear And made her miss him when he was not near Slowly he gently ripped her chest apart Squeezing between his fingers her oh so gentle heart Leaving behind an empty shell This is what happened to that poor girl who fell No one has heard from her again This tale was told to me when I was ten And believe me they exist these boogie men Who you will come across now and then But don’t be scared just don’t look them in the eyes Or later on you’ll hear your soul is another one that cries! |
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Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
Wow.. that was amazing, I love how you started it! |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
amazing poem! no words can explain how much i like this. i can't wait to see more of your work!!! great job!!! this is defenently going in my library! ~Zach~ |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
thank you falling rain you always give me nice compliments. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I like this, it's just one of those poems that could be turned into a story..great job {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
dannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng going in my library right now!!!!!! only a vampire can love you forever. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow I loved this!!! such a great story! Krysti |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
THANK YOU |
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