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tiny_ME
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0 posted 2008-03-17 03:18 AM


-why do i feel this way?
this odd feeling flashes on me always.
not in my heart but in my mind
weird though but that's the way it goes,.,.
how could i move on?
My heart is weeping deep
Shedding bloody tears
Slowly dying because of pain
Aching because i'm in vain.

No matter what I do
I could always still hear you
Why can't you just go away?
But how? in my mind you dwell and stay.

Why are your memories very alive?
Inside me it plays day and night.
I hoe this wish of mine would be granted
to throw in trash these feelings you've just waisted.
*christina*


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maddorani
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1 posted 2008-03-17 04:57 PM


wow i just feell like you i get wut umean i like this person and i cant move on
Falling rain
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2 posted 2008-03-17 06:11 PM


i defenently know how you feel. i still have feelings towards my ex gf. but i still want to move on. its hard, really hard. i don't know how to give you advise... since im going through the same problem.

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~



XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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3 posted 2008-03-17 07:22 PM


one word answer; pray.
sure it might seem like a dumb idea and u may think it wont help, but it sure worked for me! good luck,

    {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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4 posted 2008-03-18 02:02 PM


Christina, I know what yooh are feeling and the best advice I can give yooh is give it time... yes it took me a long time to get over my ex. I wanted to get back together so bad... but then after a long! time I finally moved on and i'm sure if yooh give it enough time hunn.. yooh will move on
Krysti

starpower
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since 2007-04-10
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Utah
5 posted 2008-03-18 05:56 PM


hey that was a good poem and it takes a longtime to get over anything

You can send me an email,
Thanks

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