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ONE GUY
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ONE GUY |
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~frustrated writer~ Member
since 2008-02-25
Posts 84
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i look at the sky with this one guy we then count the stars so bright i could still remember that night. he had a lot of stories to share and i lend him my ears he looked at me straight in the eye i can't help but to wink and smile. he offered me a ride on his back he ran as fast as he could as if there's a monster's trying to attack i laughed and laughed so hard when he tickled me so bad. he's the guy that i can't get off my mind how grateful am i for once he was mine why did i ever let him go? i hope he'll be mine again tomorrow. ** this is my first poem this year 2008.. what d'ya think? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh I lovedd this it was really sweet!! Krysti |
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Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
This is really good  |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
wow that was really sweet. I enjoyed reading that. Nicely put and it flowed perfectly |
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