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Teen Poetry #8
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Clockwork_Orange
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0 posted 2008-03-14 06:48 PM

its wrong to judge
say the angels in prayer
just before they lost thier wings
and fell without a care
landing in this angry sea
with a voice all its own
yelling out in forsaken fear
they sink like perfect stones
never to breath again
now their lost below

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (03-14-2008 10:16 PM).]
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1 posted 2008-03-14 06:55 PM

this was like a mini opera...very cool.
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2 posted 2008-03-14 11:22 PM

I liked it quite alot, it was short and sweet
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