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Teen Poetry #8

As uncaring as the rain

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-03-13 05:59 PM

I said I was sorry,
why don't you
listen? I didn't mean
anything by my words,
this is not how I
wanted to live. I lost
my temper, we all have
those days. I forgot
about the good things,
I couldn't focus on who
DID love me.

I told you why I didn't
stop, didn't you see me
cry? Do you feel I
betrayed you? I can't
read your eye's.
Did I really hurt you
that badly? Will you
hate me forever?
I just didn't know what
else to do, I was getting
to a point of insanity.
Couldn't you see it?
Didn't you notice?
Is that why you won't look
at me?
Because you don't care...?

Should I run to you, or will
you turn your back? Will
you leave me here, bleeding
on this forest floor?
Is this what you want for
me? Because you don't care...

I knew it all along, your
affection was fake. Now I
have no one to turn to, no
one to help me survive.

I will lie here, die here,
cold and alone with no one
to tell me how to breathe
through my tears.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-13 06:09 PM

awe this is soo sad just like the poem i recently wrote. lol (and by i do mean recently like i wrote it a few minutes ago lol) Did someone say library?

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-03-13 08:19 PM

Man this is soo sad! Absolutly brilliant poetry, but I hope this isn't from real life. Too much from real life.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-03-13 08:23 PM

hey hey,
emm, i love you sooooo much! we can get through this!
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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