Teen Poetry #8 |
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Love iSn'T worth it. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain ![]() |
the one question i have no one can answer sometimes i wonder why i guess its because they know what they say would be a lie. my one question on life is:is love really worth it? you always end up broken hearted, hurt, bruised or else you were just completely used. some people seem to have it all perfect lives, perfect loves, perfect worlds i look at them and think, it can't really be that way! they must be total fakes, each and every day. its either have that or no love at all i think i would choose no love, cause is love truly worth it? the things you actually love in life, you loose, love is a total bandit. love is something people think is great but really isn't. i don't think love is worth losing yourself for it actually seems more of a chore. i've made myself a promise and its going pretty well im never going to love that way i won't experience my own personal hell. love isn't worth it... and it never will be. at least it won't be for me. [i swear] ~missy |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
love is something people think is great but really isn't. ~ yes it can be if you have the right person to share it with.~ i've made myself a promise and its going pretty well im never going to love that way i won't experience my own personal hell. wow that stanza just knocked me right off of my chair amazing flow... hunnie* ![]() A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
in l6 you put is twice just so you know. This was really good, the flow was uneven in some parts. Emotional piece! |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thanks hunnie, thanks rhia. i put is twice b/c i couldn't figure out if it was supposed to be once or twice..haha...so i put is: is. that way. anyway, thanks for the replies gals. ~missy |
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