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softballstar
Junior Member

since 2008-03-11

Posts 15
USA

0 posted 2008-03-12 08:44 PM

Mike:

I wish I knew what you were thinking
I wish I could've been there
Then maybe I'd have stopped you
And our lives we could still share

There's so much I didnt get to say
I'm wishing you were here
I'll miss you forever and always
You took away my fear

You didn't have to do this
Maybe now your in a better place
I hope you are my angel
Watching over keeping me safe

I hope you know I loved you
A love that was real and true
But I guess it was your time
Hopefully I'll see you soon

You left behind your sister
and all you wonderful friends
I wish I knew the reason why
You put your life to an end

You'll always be in my heart
An amazing, great guy
You were always there and understanding
I'll never forget you changed my life

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-03-12 10:21 PM

Welcome to PIP!!! Good first poem!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-03-12 10:21 PM

Oh.My.Gosh...I absolutley love it! Fantastic, Amazing, Beautiful first post!! I am putting this in my library! ...k i have to read it again...
(Hope to see LOTS more!)
{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-03-12 10:43 PM

hey hey,
beautiful first post

just one quesion, are you the sister?
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

softballstar
Junior Member

since 2008-03-11

Posts 15
USA

4 posted 2008-03-12 10:48 PM

hey thanks glad you all like it ...... Yea I'm the sister

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-03-13 01:30 AM

Wow this is a really sad poem.. reallt strong,, I can relate to this really easily.. my friend Mike commited suicide too... I was friends with his brother it really made things hard on the whole family.. I hope you are doing ok... if you need to talk or vent you can email me anytime, welcome to Passions.. great first post!!! hope to read more
Krysti

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

6 posted 2008-03-13 10:16 PM

Hey that was a wonderful poem and I love the poem and way the words are put together and keep wirting your heart out to the world

You can send me an email,
Thanks

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

7 posted 2008-03-14 11:13 PM

Oh wow what a powerful poem, such emotion It was just amazing

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