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justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-03-10 04:42 PM

going back to being me
going back to when i was free
i cant believe it
someone is saving me
no longer in the darkness
where i came from
no longer crying every night
i finally can see the light
no longer lost under my life
no longer have to struggle that fight
im FREE

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-03-10 08:43 PM

I know the feeling! Awesome isn't it?

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-03-10 09:44 PM

oh so good to be free. nice write

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

3 posted 2008-03-12 06:57 PM

wow this is really great, one of ur best works in a long time. hopefully its true :O)

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2008-03-13 12:26 PM

its true

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2008-03-13 02:21 AM

guess well jsut see then.
if it is true, then i have a very important urgent question that needs to b asked and answered asap, if it is true.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

6 posted 2008-03-13 01:38 PM

This was amazing...i totally know what you are saying... well writtien

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

7 posted 2008-03-13 02:19 PM

Thank you for that wonderful poem

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

8 posted 2008-03-14 11:15 PM

this was a beautiful poem, well written and flowing nicely, and it also touched me dearly wonderful

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