Teen Poetry #8 |
Prisoner |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Prisoner A look over shoulder A glance to the side But nothing can hide it The fact won’t subside A creeping rank sensation That catches in the spine Makes you shiver fervently It curls like a vine The freezing that claws your heart Stops your tracks so dead You’ve given up surrender In hopes of no hot lead So a prisoner you shall be A captor made of hate The chemicals burn straight down Into the flooding gate It’s got your arm up, twisted Stuck in just one choice The kiss of death is haunting When you see it has no voice and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
lol-this is only funny because I know what it's about. I'm sorry Kate. This was a good vaguely haunting poem, I enjoyed it. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
enlighten me. what are you thoughts my friend? ps i love these songs you sent me. and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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