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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-03-06 09:38 PM


Prisoner

A look over shoulder
A glance to the side
But nothing can hide it
The fact won’t subside

A creeping rank sensation
That catches in the spine
Makes you shiver fervently
It curls like a vine

The freezing that claws your heart
Stops your tracks so dead
You’ve given up surrender
In hopes of no hot lead

So a prisoner you shall be
A captor made of hate
The chemicals burn straight down
Into the flooding gate

It’s got your arm up, twisted
Stuck in just one choice
The kiss of death is haunting
When you see it has no voice

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-03-06 09:42 PM


lol-this is only funny because I know what it's about.
I'm sorry Kate.
This was a good vaguely haunting poem, I enjoyed it.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

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(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-03-07 04:34 PM


enlighten me. what are you thoughts my friend? ps i love these songs you sent me.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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