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Teen Poetry #8

The Sweet Valentine

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2008-03-04 09:52 PM

again, dont care if the flowers are accurate, and this has on opposite titled "The Dark Valentine"
and yes i know its totally old

Roses are red
Violets are blue
You love me
And I love you!

Daises are yellow
Tulips are white
I don't want anyone
But you in my sight!

Carnations are purple
Daffodils are green
I want you in my life
It's you I always need!

Some flowers are pretty
But most can't compare
To the strength of our love
So kiss me now if you dare!!!

(come on, i dare u hehe :0 )

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-04 10:07 PM

haha i like the little comment at the end lol!! a little bit corny but great write lol!

~Zach~

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-03-04 10:08 PM

heheh yea i was bored in class so i wrote. lol hahah thanks.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-03-04 10:13 PM

Corny yes...But hey I like corny!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2008-03-04 10:16 PM

hahaa but conry is funny so im down lol

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-03-04 10:23 PM

nice job!

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2008-03-04 10:24 PM

hahah thanks again :]

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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