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IN PRISONED
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IN PRISONED |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
I SIT ALONE WITH THE COMFORT OF RHYTHM AND VOICES IN MY HEAD, LISTENING ATTENTIVELY TO EVERYTHING THAT HAS BEEN SAID. THE LYRICS ARE SOFT LIKE A WHISPER FROM AN ANGEL NAMED WIND ALTHOUGH I AM LONELY AND FEEL THE WALLS CLOSELY PINNED I KNOW I WILL BE GIVEN A CHANCE TO BREAK FREE AND SHOW THE WORLD THE ME THAT THEY CAN SEE MY FREEDOM WILL COME WITH A LOUD ROAR AND THERE WILL BE BLOOD SHED ON THE FLOOR AND A PRISONER I WILL BE NO MORE. I HAVE BEEN ALONE IN THE DARK FAR TOO LONG WANTING TO BE OUT IN THE WORLD WHERE I BELONG THE BEATING OF MY HEART BECOMES MY TICKING CLOCK SLOWLY BUT SURELY IT POUNDS LOUDER LIKE A BEATING ROCK! I FELT LIKE IF I WAS AT THE END OF A SMALL TUNNEL WITH MY LIFE, UNTIL I SAW LIFE RESCUING ME, PLUNGING AWAY WITH IT’S KNIFE NOW I AM FINALLY FREE FEELING LIFE BELT OUT OF ME I’M FINALLY WHERE I BELONG AFTER SO LONG MY MIND IS NOW CALM! BECAUSE I AM NOW SAFE IN THE ARMS OF MY MOM! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Lol I'm not sure why this feels funny to me but it does. Good write. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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theiamsadsong Junior Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 17 |
this poem is so beautiful. the words are captivating and meaningful without being overdoen. BRAVO! love, monica |
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