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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-02-27 06:12 PM



Words of Lore

The words that fall from your lips
Would protest that you would think
That the notion of loving has not touched air
But is not far from what you speak

The profession which you love so dear
Enticements made of lore
Have made my world of words of speak
For words last ever more

So can we just deny
That feeling which you feel
I wish things could be simple
Or fake instead of real

But maybe it is good
You’ve saved me for a time
For things were so much worse
Than my silly words of rhyme

The denial we both intend
Is but that and nothing more
We are falling ever fast
I for you and you for lore

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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1 posted 2008-02-27 06:44 PM


hey i got a question. what does "lore" mean? i dont think i ever heard of it before. this is a great poem. its one of my fave!

~Zach~  



RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-02-27 08:40 PM


fable- story- usually like a story or legend that old men tell- or that the village women would whisper about by the well- legend, story, myth, fable, that's just a cooler word for these, it's also travler's tales and the like- it's a broad range of meanings.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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3 posted 2008-02-28 10:11 PM


good post

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4 posted 2008-02-28 10:12 PM


oh that makes alot of sence then! lol
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5 posted 2008-02-28 11:20 PM


Hmmmm I feel like I'm not quite grasping this one quite yet. Maybe the person is falling in love with the notion the fable, of falling in love...hmmmm that doesn't quite seem to fit. lol

Oh well. Wonderful write Kate! I realy enjoyed this, even if I don't understand it

yet...

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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