Teen Poetry #8 |
Splitting the Silk |
Ri Member
since 2008-02-01
Posts 67Blackburn, England |
I am a skilful spider Spinning my web inside her Few let my silk come too near Though I’m feared my craft is dear Forever the outsider Pray, open your minds wider For my image may invoke fear But my craft, you should revere I’ve enticed you in, with my snare Invited you into my lair Injecting poison to your heart So that you would never depart But my weak web will soon take wear Then take an age for it’s repair A Sisyphean task, my art For when it ends I must restart My patience perfects preparing prey Burrowing any that flies my way Expanding my web to the skyline Until, caught, you and I interwine Under my venemous bite you sway Collapsing our heavy hearts both fray My one tiny flaw in my design In your fear, you could never be mine |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Lovely poem dearie! I loved the last stanza...oh! and the title! Great job! FoReVeRbRokEn |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
woah!!!!!!!!!! wow, i love it! i hate spiders *shudder* see i had this expirence while getting rid of them from the celine where one almost went in my mouth *shutter* anyways i don't care for them- but your poem is very beautiful- i started reading it and i'm like "eww i'm not reading about spiders" but ah- your words had caught me and would not let go- i loved it- one of my faves. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow love this poem!!!!!! i dont care for spiders that much too.. but your words are simply amazing!! ~Zach~ |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!GREAT JOB |
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SunnySyn Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15Texas, United States |
Speechless! (Amazing how they created a word to describe something that can't be described in words....LOL) I loved it nevertheless. Signing off, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
Wonderful poem, I will be looking forward to hear more from you. Keep it up. Some things are meant to be in the dark. |
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