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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Emotionless heart, something you had from the start, how could you do this, To me well my attempt at a haiku sorta except for the end words because if i does make sense with those lines at the end i didn't think it would with out it i don't know i was kinda thinking poemish in class... hunnie* A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I love the first two lines. The last line needs work though. Nice, way better than I could ever to. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe thanks rhia  hunnie* A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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