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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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0 posted 2008-02-24 09:09 PM



*Sigh*

It seems I have forgot myself
A rather unhelpful fact
And of course it would be better still
If I had any tact

But now I sit in places two
Where one had once sufficed
A pain-filled and abundant place
And the horror of my life

Why could I just not resist
This falling into your arms
Perhaps it was the way your manner
Refuted and disarmed

But now I have two faces
To ponder when I sleep
And two who say they love me
In actions and in speech

So what should I- a mortal do
When faced with choices concerned with two?

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-02-24 09:33 PM


I'm sorry. I've been there to.
Good poem anyway.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

crimsonXnails
Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.
2 posted 2008-02-24 10:55 PM


hey hey,
  this poem really caught my attention, and when i started to read it, i knew exactly what you were talking about. "but now i have two faces/ to ponder when i sleep/ and two who say they love me/ in actions and in speech/." wonderful. your writing really speaks to me, thank you.
  !Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2008-02-25 06:11 PM


You're welcome tracy, glad the meanderings and blatent ditherings of my soul are of the effect to help one other than myself.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2008-02-25 06:52 PM


Love It

xoxoxoxox- Star

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