Teen Poetry #8 |
close enough |
crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
i guess i just never erned it, your love i mean. you were always beside me, helping,"loving" me when you needed someone i was waiting there, but you pushed my love away, regected me, needed something, someone to hold on to. you chose darkness,cold ike your heart. as you fell, you screamed for help, but you never let me close enough, to catch you, before you hit. you knew the consequenses, you ran away, you would not openthe doors for a caring begger, trying to get closer, just close enough to grab your hand before you slip to far a w a y if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
wow, i like this alot. and i mean alot. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Not to be annoying but you got alot of spelling errors. lol i like the meaning to your poem. very good! keep it up! ~Zach~ |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
good read xoxoxox-star |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Full Emotion here,, ARCTIC WIND |
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