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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-22 03:17 PM

Gracefully gliding down
the slopes of her life,
she'll wait for the day
when she will feel what
is right. With no one
to know what happens
to her at home, she sitts
all alone in this fountain
of hatred.

She is all alone and no
one hears her cry,
"Help me please, everyone
hates me and wants me to
die!"
Her prayer is simple, for
just one person to say,
"I love you sweetie, I will
always."

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-22 04:23 PM

what does evanescent mean? cuz i always thought it was the name of a band? otherwise this poem is pretty sad but good.

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-02-22 05:21 PM

Evanescence is a band ( and the best!) but evanescent means fading, I looked it up. The dictionary is my bestest friend! lol Thanx for reading

FoReVeRbRokEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-22-2008 10:08 PM).]

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-22 05:49 PM

I loved this poem! Great job!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-02-22 05:50 PM

i use both the dicitonary and thesauras all the time! THey are my best friends too- nice job. lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

5 posted 2008-02-23 03:28 PM

loved it

xoxoxoxox-Star

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-02-23 04:05 PM

Great Write!!

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

7 posted 2008-02-23 05:11 PM

Nice write hun!
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

8 posted 2008-02-23 05:33 PM

Hey Em.. Love the title.. your getting good at them now.. The poem touches me.. and It'll be okay sweetie.. i promise to catch u when you fall.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

9 posted 2008-02-23 05:58 PM

awwww, thanx Jessie Hun! hahah i love calling u that! It means alot to me when u say that.

FoReVeRbRokEn

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-02-24 10:59 AM

Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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