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Teen Poetry #8

falling in love

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

0 posted 2008-02-19 08:52 PM

i look into your eyes,
suductive and kind,
twenty stories down.
you stand in the shadows,
saving yourself,
for me alone.
i barely know you,
only about you.
the things i have heard,
dangerous, cleaver,
deciteful,
just make me want you more.

a laugh escapes my throat,
raw and burning
from all the crying,
and somehow, i know
you'll make it all better.
i look at my scars
and in that moment,
you've snuck up behind me,
quiet, and surprising

"i'll take you quick"
he says, as he leans in
breath hot on my neck.
i turn my face,
to meet his loving,
compassionate
gaze.
my hands are trembling
and i'm new
to all of this,
but i let go of my fears,
fall into your arms
and i find myself
kissing death
as i free fall
into your love.

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

[This message has been edited by crimsonXnails (02-21-2008 12:15 AM).]

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-19 10:34 PM

this one was hard for me to find a name for this. but im thinking..umm... how about "Falling to my death" or "Falling for you"? im just guessing on this lol

~Zach~

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-20 10:42 PM

Tracey, i totally understood this feeling... loved it!!!
Krysti

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

3 posted 2008-02-21 12:58 PM

that must be one special guy

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-21 04:23 PM

This feeling is very common I say. It is always good to let it out even when you think it won't help, Because in reality It reallllllly works.

I enjoyed your piece full of Emotions and powerful saying's from your own mind

ARCTIC WIND

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