Teen Poetry #8 |
falling in love |
crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
i look into your eyes, suductive and kind, twenty stories down. you stand in the shadows, saving yourself, for me alone. i barely know you, only about you. the things i have heard, dangerous, cleaver, deciteful, just make me want you more. a laugh escapes my throat, raw and burning from all the crying, and somehow, i know you'll make it all better. i look at my scars and in that moment, you've snuck up behind me, quiet, and surprising "i'll take you quick" he says, as he leans in breath hot on my neck. i turn my face, to meet his loving, compassionate gaze. my hands are trembling and i'm new to all of this, but i let go of my fears, fall into your arms and i find myself kissing death as i free fall into your love. if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying [This message has been edited by crimsonXnails (02-21-2008 12:15 AM).] |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this one was hard for me to find a name for this. but im thinking..umm... how about "Falling to my death" or "Falling for you"? im just guessing on this lol ~Zach~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Tracey, i totally understood this feeling... loved it!!! Krysti |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
that must be one special guy |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This feeling is very common I say. It is always good to let it out even when you think it won't help, Because in reality It reallllllly works. I enjoyed your piece full of Emotions and powerful saying's from your own mind ARCTIC WIND |
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